Lord of the Bears (Part One): New Mate, by Jess Hayek
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Lord of the Bears (Part One): New Mate, by Jess Hayek
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Does size matter?
Bigger is better. Bears are bigger. Bears are better.
Logan is a bear-shifter with a heart as big as his body and he's searching for a new mate. Jenny wasn't expecting much when she finished work at the diner. Just another sad and lonely night alone in her cheap apartment. She definitely wasn't expecting Logan, a rich and handsome wanderer with the body of a god to be waiting for her outside. As things heat up in Logan's cabin, can Jenny resist giving herself completely to this seductive man with a supernatural secret? This story is intended for mature readers. Lord of the Bears (Part One): New Mate, by Jess Hayek- Amazon Sales Rank: #606931 in eBooks
- Published on: 2015-03-27
- Released on: 2015-03-27
- Format: Kindle eBook
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10 of 10 people found the following review helpful. The story is great, the book is as long as a normal chapter in in regular book. By Shelly58 A woman meets a man and does what Jenny does with absolutely no questions asked! She takes everything at face value. This is an awesome story, but even for .99$ I expected more. Me. Hayek could have put so much more into the story. Concept is great. Storyline went from 0-100 in a blink. It's like going thru a little town if you blink you missed it. I bought all books at once thinking I'd have a nice weekend. It took me just a few minutes to read the first book. 25 pages. That's it. Jesus Hayek Please add some as my English college teacher would say "meat" to your story.Jenny is to mild. She asks no questions. Does not bat an eyelash. This is not!! a believable reaction for anybody let alone a waitress at a small diner in a very small town.I've read a lot of paranormal shifter books and werewolf would not go down that easy.I've paid for the books I really do love the concept I'm hoping the next book has more then just enough pages to fill a chapter in a normal book.
11 of 12 people found the following review helpful. Great Potential; Poor Presentation By Ravyn Karasu I normally don’t even bother leaving reviews when they are this low, but in this case, I felt it was the proper thing to do, not so much to bad-mouth the work, but because I actually wanted to build on the positive potential.I’m going to be honest. This book was something I really wanted to read after reading similar stories by other authors and, while the concept of the story is very good, the delivery and presentation is just terrible. The story is SO rushed and disorganized that it feels more like I was reading the author notes rather than the story. I didn’t feel welcomed in. There was no character development, no angst, no…anything. It was just a bunch of rushed things going on, characters popping in from nowhere, things being resolved in two sentences. It was such a real shame because this story really has SO MUCH in it that would make for one really AWESOME book.I think the story should have been drawn out longer with more development. As a reader, I want to be invested in the characters and care about them. I didn’t feel like I was even supposed to care what happened to these two people. There are so many GOOD ideas and they are just not being utilized properly. A slower pace, more detail and a calmer mindset would really improve it. The chronological flow of the story is actually fine, but WAY too rushed. Everything happens in the right order, but if you blink, you miss it.I really hate leaving a bad review, especially on a story I REALLY want to love and I think has SO much going for it. I honestly believe the author can do way better than this, and even with the help of a pre-reader or an editor could make tremendous improvements on already present awesome ideas. The story (in its conceptual layout) is so good. If it was just written with more organization and care, I’d have no problems wanting to buy the whole series to read. I do hope that perhaps the author considers redoing these stories in a more well-thought-out draft. She really does have the heart of such a good story, but the meat is very…scrawny.I know short stories, especially erotica can be a bit scrambled, and I really wanted to give it a higher rating, but I just think it falls a little too short of its intended purpose or potential. As I said though, I really do believe the author is CAPABLE of redoing this story as something really awesome and fun to read if these issues are addressed and fixed.
12 of 13 people found the following review helpful. No build up By VeteranWife04 Everything was rushed from the moment Logan pick her up in his car. They have sex, talk or marriage and babies and the next morning he gives her 50k and tells her he loves her. Wtf? It's almost like she sold herself for a night of pleasure while he told her everything she wanted to hear. She wasn't even afraid of his bear form.
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